Shark tank Non cronological report!

Hi everyone have you ever wondered what a non chronological report is ?

It's pretty simple Its like a normal report about a product or something but you cannot use the words I ,me ,my, you and we add there are things like you need an introduction and an conclusion and style materials and a whole lot of different things .

I used piktochart to create my non chronological report,here it is.

Here is the non chronological report just Written because it is a bit hard to read the actual report uploaded from piktochart.

The Jet tent

Epic Jet tent

Introduction 

This product is called the jet tent. It is called the jet tent because it is designed for times where a pet isn't going to be safe.  There are two main features: 1) a self opening tent and 2) jet propulsion. Say your pet animal went wandering off up a hill and then realized how late it was, with the Jet tent it could stay there for a whole night and be safe in the tent.   However the other option is that the pet could be whisked away up into the air because of the jet plane feature. Also, the tent can shrink and shrink the animal to a very small space like the size of a pet owners hand. It also has heating all controlled by the animal with a headpiece around it’s head.

Style

The Jet tent has the ability to protect the animal on the ground or to fly it away to safety.   Because its a jet plane you can get to places fast. Whether on the ground or in the air the tent  provides heating and an air bed so it has somewhere to sleep. It is important because it helps your pet stay alive and also if your stuck in something you can use the jetpack to pull you out it has 5000 hp so it really is easy.

It has a head piece that connects to his brain and then he can control what he wants the tent to do that is if it is capable of the tent it self.

Material It is made out of very high quality material a solid metal case that is made of gold then a whole lot of leather cloth for the outside of the tent to it is waterproof,  Then it has a metal sheet that folds out for the top of the tent if it is hailing or there is thunder the metal is thunder proof the thunder bounces off the metal sheet. And all the metal and materials are all very light.

Cost

The cost for the Jet tent is high and very high for a reason.A jetpack right now today already costs around 150,000-250,000 dollars!  The tent jet costs 200,000 dollars and that is already like a discount plus the other things like fuel and that whis is free 10,000 litres then that’s a reasonable price with a tent and it is made of solid gold! 

The enchantment of life for the animal

The animal is smarter because it has the power the think about smarter things and use its imagination to do some cool things and it controls the tent 

Suitability for Pets 

The Jet tent will suit any pet owners animal no matter what!  Trust me! It shrinks the animal and the tent itself to a suitable size that you can choose.

Conclusion 

So this means that all pet owners will be able to relax without  worrying about having a pet lost. Also it will make a great habitat for the pet.  So this is a very good product.

Home work blog post

Eclipse, Eclipse, Eclipse

Hello bloggers, What would you think would happen to the world if there was an eclipse for a very long time like 5 days. Here are some answers to what my family thinks. I have used to render forest.

See you next blog!

The grateful Crane

Hey there bloggers,

I'm back today with another post, this post is about a story that I read when I was doing my reading work, it is called the Grateful Crane . Here is a summary.

The Grateful Crane is a Japanese story that is about a man. One day he had finished getting wood and was going back to his home. The day changed slowly into night. It was a cold winter night when he saw a crane that was trapped. He helped the crane and went home. Then a girl came to his house and kept making silk fabric and they kept on selling it and making money. Then one day they realized the girl was the crane and so then the crane flew away.

Here is a slide show to show you what happened.

Thankyou for watching!

Number patterns

Hey bloggers.


What is a number pattern you might wonder. A number pattern is something that was invented by
fibonicci. A number pattern is when you start of with a number so 5 then times by a number which i will have as 6 and then a number to add or subtract which is 5 so 5x6+5=35 .

improved cool new subject for all schools!

What would you innovate to make a new subject to teach children? What would it be? I thought of an idea which is called reating.

 I came up with that name it is when you take reading and writing and combine them together .You read a piece of a story and then you continue it in a different book and make it like a b2 then there will be a whole series of something written by a whole lot of different authors and.


 I have created a device that may help a bit while doing it it is called the reatbot02.
here is an image of what it might look like

The ripper rugby tournament!!!

Hey there bloggers!

On monday we held a ripper rugby tournament at our school!

where about 4 or 5 diffrent schools came to our school to play ripper rugby including west melton and we played 4 rounds of aprox 30 mins .

if you do not know what ripper rugby is here is a video to explain it .

here are a few images of us playing ripper rugby

 

Hope you enjoyed. pleas can you comment if there is anything that I can do to make it even better!.