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Tuesday, 16 July 2019

WLJ activity nine awesome Phoenix report

Hi again ,
sorry for not posting yesterday I only had a limited time and I was working on a short Non Chronological report. So I'm posting today my Non Chronological report,this report is about phoenixes.

Please leave a comment for what I can do to make my other post's even better.





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  1. Mrs Spragg17 July 2019 at 11:10

    Hi Jonathon,

    Great to see how much you are doing on your Winter Learning Journey.

    Interesting Non-Chron Report. You have used all the parts of the report. I didn't know that Phoenix are allergic to hay and get hay fever. I think you could have written a stronger conclusion though. I like your drawings, they add interest to your report.

    Keep up the great blogging and commenting.
    :) Mrs Spragg

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