l-lights in your house
i-insite
g-great lights you've got!!
t-too much lights!!!
S-summer learning journey
hope you liked my acrostic poem !
Thursday, 17 January 2019
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Hi there, my name is Luseane and i was a student at Wesley Primary School. I am from the Ako Hiko cluster i am a blogger like you. I really like how you wrote a nice calming acrostic poem. This activity reminded me of when i did this on my blog. Maybe next time you could say what activity/week your on. If you would like, my blog is http://wpsluseanem.blogspot.com/
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Namaste Jonothan,
ReplyDeleteWow, what a good poem! I really like the words you used for the poem such as insite. What does insite mean? It was very nice that you included the Summer Learning Journey, but in this poem it is about the lights, not the Summer Learning Journey. If I were you, maybe you could spicen things up with a picture or 2, or maybe some colourful things to make it more interesting and original. Other than that, I would definitely remember this!
Do you like the southern lights?
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Gargee HPS
hpsgargeej.blogspot.co.nz
Hello Jonathon,
ReplyDeleteI am Vitaraag. I really love your acrostic poem. I just have one question. It is what does the summer learning journey have to do with the southern lights? Maybe you can change that next time. I really like how you said some new words that I didn't even know like insite. Maybe next time you can say if you want to go and see the southern lights. Keep up the amazing work!
Vitaraag
Hi Jonathon,
ReplyDeleteWell done in completing another Summer Learning Journey blog post, keep it coming!
You have created a great acrostic poem, I like that you have included "Summer Learning Journey" in it. Do you think you would like to go and see the Southern Lights one day? I'd love to see you create an acrostic poem about what you think it would be like to see the Southern Lights.
Until next time, happy blogging. :)