In the past 2 weeks we have been learning about non chron report's I have learnt about how To write a non chron report .Some things were a bit hard for me to do like third person.so here is my one that I wrote.
Introduction
the super shoe is a very comfortable shoe It was invented by donald trump.
50 children were asked to try it for a week.
Style
It comes in a light shade of blue.They have jet packs underneath each shoe with a mp3 player .The shoes also give you super speed and the inside feels like your standing on a gel cloud .They never run out of energy.It also has quite a lot of things that may come in handy like a 1 times half inch phone. And a mini knife That has a laser that cuts metal.
Material
It is made mostly out of rubber and strong cloth with metal and a few pieces of metal it has no laces.this is important for it to not have laces because underneath each shoe there is a jetpack.that's just for safety.because a child got burnt and just about died So that's why they do not have laces any more .
Price
They will be available from the warehouse and number one shoes they will cost 115 at number one shoes and also the warehouse. Most people will want to buy a pair because they are very handy
Some people don't want to buy them because they are pricey.
Conclusion
99 percent liked it so much they all brought a pair and even told so many people About how much they loved wearing it.They were wearing it to school and in every event like cross country they won it.
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