My writing

This week I have been doing some writing about a narrative and here is my narrative

On a stormy night, A boy called Jonathon and his friend zack go to the computer in their house.

The computer is brand new and they decide to play some games on it the game’s they played were all cool lie nitrome,bic,bic3 and nitro type. But when they got to play nitro type it went all bonkers like crazy. Jonathon did not know what to do and after playing it for so long how could it just go bonkers like that and they could not know what to do Jonathon  had a USB stick that had no storage used and he plugged it the new computer.the computer did nothing now what are we going to do said zack well, Jonathon said the process is not done we need to upload this virus to the use drive, after a few minutes it was done Now we can plug it into the hackers computer said, Jonathon,. But there is no computer hacker the person that put the virus in the computer  I have an old computer that is pretty broken that we can use to find his location okay so that is where he lives well let's get a rope and some weapons, like some nunchucks, food and, A phone. Okay now did you bring the USB drive yes it is right here okay now we can plug it in the computer of the hacker?

Now let's write important meeting at pz4,s house to night and he will hopefully open it now leave it like that and hide Two hours later oh that right said the hacker  and he opened it on dammit now my computer has a virus wow look at his computer said zack it is going crazy like all of his tabs are going crazy flying all over the place