Recount´s

This term We have been learning about recounts Here is one of my recounts think that I liked it quite A bit I also thought that it was challenging because I had to write A minimum amount of words.

Last Friday it was athletics day for our school. Our first rotation was long jump. We had three jumps. My highest score was 2.94 meters. I came 2nd to last. Our next station was shot put I like shot put I threw an average 5 point 50 meters. We also had 3 throws. It was great. We then went to discuss We got three throws again. I threw About 8 meters with A 750-gram discus I think that my friend was quite happy because He threw 11.50 with A 1kg!!!!!. We then rotated to sprints It was a longer walk because It was Way over the other side of the fields and at the start we were at the end of the Field so it took us about 3 minutes to walk there We did sprints We first did 50m sprints my time was 9.33 seconds And We then did 80m My time was 14.34 second then finally we did the hundred meter I got 19 seconds 20 miller seconds. After that we had a brake For about half an hour to three-quarters of an hour and then continued with the last thing. It was  high jump I came second with 97 cm then we packed up all the equipment and did house relays Our team came second It was quite good I think that It was the best we had ever done We then did Team relays With the parents We came last now we have a reason . and that reason Is because We had 10 people and other teams had 6 and we were so closely tied then it was time to go home We actually got to go home early and that was the earliest time we had ever been let to go home on a 6 hour day We then just waited and waited till there a clock. I felt like it was the best day in my life at school And next time it will be even better I would say

For the people that made it to the zones well good luck for them I think that they will be very pleased with their placing And for all the first places I also think they are so happy.

What I found hard-Writing the recounts and coming up with the ideas for my recount.
What improvements I could have done-Add in more punctuation
Put spaces between the paragraphs.
What I am proud of - I am proud of my amount of writing
I am proud of The conclusion I made and the detail of the things that I did.