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Thursday 14 September 2017

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Once there was a new kid that it was his  first day and he was a kid that saand he t in a wheelchair when they heard that an elephant that had escaped from a circus it was heading for a school then it crashed through the school gates and it charged at a tree it fell over and onto the school power lines.They  made a spark and it started a fire the new kid said out of my way and he pressed the panel on his wheel chair it started to hover and then he pressed water and water sprayed all over the fire . The fire went off then the elephant charged at the playground it was  going to be destroyed but the new kid chewed on some bubble gum and blew it up as big as the elephant the elephant was stuck inside the bubble gum but it  used its tusks to pop the bubble gum and destroyed the whole school.but he caught the elephant and brung him to the circus and sprayed some haptinze spray on it that would make the elephant train with getting lazy for ever. Then that circus became the most famous kid and circus.

He made lots of money and was the most richest kid in the world and smartest kid in the world  then he created an act called the flying elephant paper ears on the elephant and trained the elephant to flap its ears and then they made an act called the teleporting elephant and the ele could time travel by the time he finished making the second act. His hair was grey but he was made king of inventions. One day he fell in a trap and he was stuck in a hole but he climbed out after trying 200 times.



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